Ollie, you made a strong start, introducing yourself and the presentation.  There was too much text on your second slide and this was confusing and made it a bit difficult to read – you could have broken this down more and summarised the main points.  Your presentation skills were excellent and you avoided turning around and reading off of the board.  This shows an acute awareness of audience and was a massive improvement on your previous presentations.

 

feedback and pitch evaluation

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